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Friday, 23 June 2017

Cybersmart .2 Blake L

I have been working on different sentence types. It has helped me with my learning because it helps structure the paragraphs. Here is what I have done. 


Friday, 16 June 2017

Danny and the three little pigs

Why the wolf is innocent


One afternoon I was  home baking a cake for my granny when I realised I needed some more sugar. In this situation I would visit my neighbours to see if the have any spare. Of course I went to visit the three little pigs because they lived nearby. As I strolled along I started to feel as sick as a parrot. I was sneezing a coughing everywhere.  

I strolled to the first house. This house was made out of straw. It didn't look that strong.Firstly I knocked on the door of the first little pig. He looked through the keyhole to see who was there. He answered in a  in polite voice saying "what do you want." I feel my request for sugar was very reasonable. I had a cold and I felt a sneeze coming. I sneezed and the house collapsed. I felt cruel. It made me feel like a tornado clearing out a city.   the poor little pig was stuck at the bottom of this disaster. Since it was lying there as dead as a cow I decided to eat it. It made me feel better but I was still sick. Don't you think this house was a bit pathetic?

The next house wasn't much better. I knocked on the door standing there unhappily waiting for an answer. Finally an answer! He answered saying what on earth  do you want! "Some sugar." "Can I please have some?" He shouted at me saying "Go away!" I felt another sneeze coming. Once again the house fell down and crushed him. This pig was also lying there peacefully. Since this pig also got crushed I ate this one as well.

I strolled along the path towards the third house. This house was much better it was made out of bricks. I was ready to get sugar when I knocked on the door but there's no answer. A few seconds later this pig replied and told me to "Get out of my property!" I felt disrespected so I walked back home but before I left another sneeze came. The greedy pig shouted some mean things about my granny. Normally I'm a calm man but when someone talks about my granny in a bad way I get angry. The inside of me felt like a volcano about to erupt. Then I tried to blow the house down because he was saying mean things. The cops came and arrested me. When I got released I was on the hunt for more sugar again.

These are my reasons why I am innocent. I didn't purposely blow their house down, I had a bad cold. If you sneezed the house would probably fall down because it was made out of straw don't you think? The only reason why I tried to blow the third house down because the pig inside was saying some nasty things about my granny. I ate the pig because it was lying there dead. It would have been a waste of food. Don't you think these reasons are good enough? This is why i'm innocent!

Why Earthquakes Happen by Pax


Why Earthquakes Happen

An earthquake is when 2 plates rub together creating a strong force pushing on each other. When the 2 plates start moving again they grip onto each other extremely tight and this causes an earthquake.

There are about 20 plates along the surface of the earth that move continuously and slowly past each other.  When 2 plates rub together it creates a strong force strong enough to shake the earth. As the plates move they put forces on themselves and each other. When the force is large enough, the crust is forced to break.

Underneath the Earth's surface lie tectonic plates. Sometimes they slide under one another or push up against each other, creating enormous stress. When they move again, they cause an earthquake. When the ground starts to crack it also starts to shake the ground.

The Earth is made up of four layers - the inner core, the outer core, the mantle and the crust. The mantle is about 1,750 miles thick, while the crust is only about 8 miles thick. When the tectonic plates slide apart, they create tremendous force. This force causes the earth to shake and ripple. Over 80 percent of the earthquakes happen in the pacific oceans in a place known as the ring of fires. Around 10,000 people die in earthquakes every year. Most of the deaths happenP when people are trapped in falling buildings. Scientists can use specials tools to record the strength of an earthquake. The Difference between the 20 plates that make up the earth and the tectonic plates is that the tectonic plates are very close to each other and can rub quite hard against each other.

To keep safe from an earthquake you have to get under a piece of strong furniture and cover yourself. If you are stuck in a building, quickly run outside to somewhere far away from the building.

I think that earthquakes should stop because very strong ones can kill loads of people and of people and in small earthquakes, it can kill animals and badly injure humans. I think that one day in the future scientists will invent aa way to stop earthquakes

Wolf Perspective by Cooper


The real story of the three little pigs
One afternoon, I needed sugar for my cake for granny I decided to go round  the neighbourhood to see if anyone else had some sugar.
I walked to the first house the pig who lived here was fat and cranky. I think that's why he has made his house out of straw cause he tired and lazy got it. I stepped forward and knocked on the door it fell straight in I wasn't going to just walk into someone's house so I called out "Little pig , Little pig no one answered Suddenly , I felt something tingling on my nose then a great sneeze came out and I blew the house down then I saw a the big fat pig lying dead on the floor so I ate him what it was the only thing to do and plus I'm very hungry.
So I decided to keep moving to the fat pigs brother house his house was made out of silly sticks  again with the straw and the sticks just why? So I kept on walking this time I carefully knocked on the door and I looked away quite quickly because of the door then I slowly turned around the door  was still there I heard a response go away you best. I yelled out can you open the door maybe he replied ,again something made me let out a sneeze this one was awful and there he was dead  so I ate him too  you don't want spoilt dinner do you.
I walked to the next house this time I was positive I would get the sugar  I looked around and this house was made from dark red bricks "He must be the smart one in his family" I said to myself. I knocked on the door and there was a loud bang from inside I decided to climb up the chimney to have a look what it was and behind me was the cops  I ran fro my life to try and escape but they were too fast for me so I tried to trick them by hiding by a tree and waiting for them to find out that I tried to hide.
 But at the end they caught me I tried to explain explain but but like all criminals they didn't believe me.




The Pigs Framed the Wolf by Craig


The Three Pigs Framed The Wolf!

Have you read the three little pigs well you haven't read the true story. Those pink porks framed me. I never blow their house down. They are the worst liars ever.

When i was walking down the beautiful beach I saw those little pigs break there ugly house with a giant fan and they blamed it on me they are so cruel! When i was walking down the path for their house and they broke another one of their houses they broke two of their own houses one was straw and one was hay. So then they left out a cake and they filled it with straw and hay so when I ate the cake it would look like I blew their house down. So I ate the cake and I had hay and straw all over my lips. It was so  annoying.
  
I heard the pigs at night because i am a next door neighbour so i heard them talking about me the wolf must go to jail. The next day they called the police and said you have the right to remain silent and i said what did i do they said you broke my house and i said no i didn't. They said than what is that on your lips and i said they made a cake with hay and straw in it and i ate it. They didn't believe me so they put me in handcuffs and i had to go to jail for 5 months. 

Luckily i will come back and sue the pigs for framing me and i will say the guy down the street killed them. So i am in jail and i will get them back and put them in jail for the whole eternity. They will never have to see me again.

Three Little Pig Story by Danny


Why the Wolf is Innocent
  
One afternoon I was home baking a cake for my granny when I realised I needed some more sugar. In this situation I would visit my neighbours to see if the have any spare. Of course I went to visit the three little pigs because they lived nearby. As I strolled along I started to feel as sick as a parrot. I was sneezing a coughing everywhere.  

I strolled to the first house. This house was made out of straw. It didn't look that strong.Firstly I knocked on the door of the first little pig. He looked through the keyhole to see who was there. He answered in a  in polite voice saying "what do you want." I feel my request for sugar was very reasonable. I had a cold and I felt a sneeze coming. I sneezed and the house collapsed. I felt cruel. It made me feel like a tornado clearing out a city. the poor little pig was stuck at the bottom of this disaster. Since it was lying there as dead as a cow I decided to eat it. It made me feel better but I was still sick. Don't you think this house was a bit pathetic?

The next house wasn't much better. I knocked on the door standing there unhappily waiting for an answer. Finally an answer! He answered saying what on earth  do you want! "Some sugar." "Can I please have some?" He shouted at me saying "Go away!" I felt another sneeze coming. Once again the house fell down and crushed him. This pig was also lying there peacefully. Since this pig also got crushed I ate this one as well.

I strolled along the path towards the third house. This house was much better it was made out of bricks. I was ready to get sugar when I knocked on the door but there's no answer. A few seconds later this pig replied and told me to "Get out of my property!" I felt disrespected so I walked back home but before I left another sneeze came. The greedy pig shouted some mean things about my granny. Normally I'm a calm man but when someone talks about my granny in a bad way I get angry. The inside of me felt like a volcano about to erupt. Then I tried to blow the house down because he was saying mean things. The cops came and arrested me. When I got released I was on the hunt for more sugar again.

These are my reasons why I am innocent. I didn't purposely blow their house down, I had a bad cold. If you sneezed the house would probably fall down because it was made out of straw don't you think? The only reason why I tried to blow the third house down because the pig inside was saying some nasty things about my granny. I ate the pig because it was lying there dead. It would have been a waste of food. Don't you think these reasons are good enough? This is why i'm innocent!

Big Bad Wolf by Ben


Big Bad Wolf

One afternoon, I was at home and I needed some extra sugar for my granny's cake. In this situation I would visit my neighbours to see if they have any spare. Of course I went to visit the three pigs because they were local.

Firstly, I knocked on the door of the first little pig. He looked through the keyhole to see who was there. He answered in a rude voice saying, "What on earth do you want?!"
My request for sugar was reasonable. I was as sick as a parrot and didn't feel well. I felt a sneeze coming on and felt like the house was going to crumble in. When I sneezed the wind from my mouth came out like a hurricane. I didn't purposely do it, but, the house was made out of straw basicly dust. That is a bit pathetic don't you think?  

The next house wasn't much better, it was wood-made. I knocked on the door standing there  for an answer. Finally, after a decade of waiting, an answer! He answered saying, "What in the pig's name do you want!
I replied, "Some sugar please. May I please have some sugar?" He shouted rudely at me saying, "No wolf, go away!" I felt another sneeze coming on again. Once again his house came down in crush.
  
I got to the next house, this house looked like a fortress, it was made out of bricks. I was certain I would get sugar. I knocked on the door waiting, there was no answer. A few seconds later the pigs shouted at me through the keyhole saying, "Get lost! Get  off my property!" I felt disrespected. I started to stroll away when the pig started to comment mean things about my granny. Then I grew angry. I felt like a volcano erupting. I turned back and tried to blow the house down because he was saying nasty things to me .

These are my reasons why I am innocent. Don't you think they are good enough? I didn't purposely blow their house down. I had a bad cold. If you had a cold and you sneezed with a house made out of straw it would fall down.