Danny your story was very imaginative but maybe next time you could make it less violent because You eating pigs that have just been killed is not very nice by Flynn.
Kia ora Leila and Mugdha, I like the way that you could make so many words from the challenge. Next time can you write more about what you did. From Emma
Howdy Lily D I really loved your post because you made 52 words! Hope you can do it again soon bye Lily by Flynn.
ReplyDeleteDanny your story was very imaginative but maybe next time you could make it less violent because You eating pigs that have just been killed is not very nice by Flynn.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Leila and Mugdha, I like the way that you could make so many words from the challenge. Next time can you write more about what you did. From Emma
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