Friday, 16 June 2017

My profile to go onto the blog by Emma

Hi my name is Emma I am 10 years old and I go to Stonefields School. I have a dog called Baxter and he his 10 years old and I also have a cat called Lola. I like animals, cooking and baking. I play tennis, soccer, swimming and I am a girl. I like running and soccer.
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  1. Kia ora Emma I really liked your profile description.I liked how you said all your hobbies like you said you like swimming,you play tennis,you like cooking, and baking.But one thing you need to work on is probably making it a bit longer and describe more about your self like what do you like like what movies do you like or what toys do you like ?.From Eugene L

    1. Hi Eugene, I liked your suggestion but next time make your coment have more sense and add punctuation and thank you for your comment.
      From Emma

  2. Hello Emma, I really liked your post. But some parts of your blog post didn’t make sense. I think you should proofread your writing before you share it.. Your picture was really nice and I like the way you were creative with the colors. Where did you learn to online draw like that ? From Inayah

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