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Thursday 24 August 2017

Planet Panda by Aurelia


Planet Panda

Once there was a submarine on planet panda It was at the bottom of the ocean. So scuba pandas raced to the surface and off to shore. When they got to shore they saw aliens cutting down all of their bamboo their ,habitat and food source! They started to die. And were becoming endangered and captured and put in cosmic zoos. Their only wish was to be free again even for only one day. They were forced to do tricks and there was only fourteen aliens on the petition to save them because they were so cute. The panda face on the front of the planet was fading into an earth looking planet. Mayor Griffin was starting up a satellite that would make his face on the front of the planet. Luckily it was twelve months away from launch. Sixty days later the petition had fourty hundred & seventy two which is roughly twelve thousand & sixty nine aliens away from stopping cruelty and the satellite. But they only had ten months to get one thousand & seven hundred & fourty one aliens and they were still twelve thousand & sixty nine aliens away. Three months later they finally did it with five months to spare Griffin was very surprised. But a deal is a deal so he said no more to everyone and stopped the satellite and left the planet for ever and the pandas were safe again.



3 comments:

  1. Hi Aurelia I loved your story it was very creative and descriptive I wonder what the pandas will be up to next time. From Flynn

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    1. Kia ora Flynn, thanks for the feedback. Next time it’s going to be more of the pandas being mean with laser guns instead of aliens. From Aurelia

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  2. Hi Aurelia I loved your story it was very creative and descriptive I wonder what the pandas will be up to next time. From Flynn

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